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Coaching with Katherine Center prize for Coaching with Katherine Center

A personal critique and one-on-one conversation with acclaimed author Katherine Center

Contest Details

Begins: May 29, 2009

Ends: June 29, 2009

Do The Write Thing -- We have a winner!

More than 200 entries made the deadline for our writing contest, representing an extraordinary array of striking voices, styles and experiences.

"There was something amazing about every single piece...," said our judge, acclaimed novelist Katherine Center. "Some had very strong dialogue, some had great rhythm, some had powerful insights and some were very moving.

"Having to pick just one was tough because different pieces were strong in different ways and for different reasons. I could argue myself one direction, and then turn around and go another."

So, who did Katherine chose? (Drumroll): "Aunts Get to Cry at Graduations, Too," by Jenny Appleseed, aka Laurie Boris.

Here are Katherine's glowing reflections on Laurie's piece: "I love the intimacy of the second-person voice...It pulls you in and lets you participate in something very personal. You feel like maybe you've stumbled upon a letter you maybe weren't supposed to read.

"There are so many specific details in the piece--from images to bits of dialogue--that bring this boy to life. The mohawk, the tie-dye, the monogrammed handkerchiefs, the victrola. Also the wiping scene!

"The details are so richly observed--you can't help but feel that this aunt was really paying attention, really trying to soak up every minute with her nephew. Even the way she calls him "dude" seems real and intimate. You can feel the tenderness and the bond between them. The warmth.

"I love the language--how it serves the piece but doesn't overwhelm it. Simple, clear. And I love the way you're learning about the nephew--all these details about who he is and how he's changed since the speaker first encountered him still inside his mother's body.

"But at the same time, you get a sense of the speaker herself learning and growing, of time passing, of the way really getting to know him over the years has had as much of an impact on her life as she did on his. It works on many different levels, and it's a pleasure to read!"

"I'm so excited and honored and humbled," said an overwhelmed Laurie, who notes: "I wasn't sure if I was going to be able to attend the ceremony because of a recent back injury. I thought that if I wrote this letter, it would muster up my 'stubborn' and help me do it anyway. And I went. And I cried. And it rained. And it was fabulous!!"

Congratulations to Laurie – and to the runners up who are:

ProComic Diva, for "Cora Mae." This piece has a very strong voice and evokes a real sense of place," Katherine said. "It feels like you are hearing a real conversation. And though the language is very conversational, it's highly poetic at the same time. I love the easy rapport between the speakers, and I can really feel the bond between them as they talk about love and and marriage. And when Henry Dodd comes riding up to them for dinner, I feel genuinely curious about what's going to happen next."

Annie B. for "Tracking Packy." "I love the quirky details in this story and the surefooted storytelling. It starts off strong with a vivid image of a grandfather literally trying to run from death, and it moves purposefully through the story of the funeral afterwards," Katherine said.

"The dialogue is very strong, here, and I love the grandmother character--especially the way she tries to fix up the body of her husband after it's been prepared for the viewing. I also love the tender detail of 'that thing' around the grandmother's neck--an anniversary present from a life now gone."

Sally G. for "Words Can Change a Life." Katherine was struck by the essay's "lovely final scene," and praised the way the piece "builds its way up to the elderly woman's poignant and life-changing words: 'How lucky you are!' "

Amanda Green for "A First Date." A "charming piece," said Katherine, with a "terrific and evocative opening line": "If the world's a stage, then I'd like to tap the mic and ask, 'Is this thing on?'"

Congratulations again to Laurie and the runners up -- and many thanks to Katherine, who took time out from the tour for her latest book, "Everyone is Beautiful," to be our judge.

And thank you to everyone who entered. You heard what Katherine said: You're all amazing!

Click here to see entries

Prize

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Contest Details

Begins: May 5, 2009

Ends: May 7, 2009

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